This is rather brief. When I say this, I mean this is very,very,very short and must be lengthened. Try and give us some back story. If there is back story at all.
I find it interesting how most of your characters don't have names. It really shows how the focus is all on Raven.
This is rather brief. When I say this, I mean this is very,very,very short and must be lengthened. Try and give us some back story. If there is back story at all.
ReplyDeleteI find it interesting how most of your characters don't have names. It really shows how the focus is all on Raven.
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